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Ann Collins's avatar

I'm new to your work, Jeremy. I like what you're doing with the sleepless little prince and his mother, the raging river, and the mysterious stag. Maybe something is "rotten in the state"? Or that river might be dividing the living and the dead worlds? Hmmmm . . .fun!! This dark fairytale is full of treachery and troubadours--is it part of a longer story you're writing?

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

Thank you, Ann.😊 Honestly, I'm not sure. I feel this story has potential. And I appreciate that you think so, too

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David MacGregor's avatar

My only question is — beside the Acquabus (sp?) — why didn’t the horse notice? Gripping story.

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

That's an excellent question. I should ask the horse. 😊

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David MacGregor's avatar

Good idea!

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

😁😂

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